Thursday, 22 March 2018

Sea Poem

Poem About The Ocean
Rap Style

The Ocean The Ocean
Eating All The Sand Around

The Sea The Sea
Looking Straight At Me

The Crabs The Crabs Hiding In Their Shell Just Like A Tiny Shell Deep In The Sand

The Tuna The Tuna Looking Out For Bigger Fish watching for smaller fish Waiting For A Feast

The Boats The Boats Sailing In The Gusty Wind

The Surfers The Surfers Getting mashed By The massive Waves

2 comments:

  1. Hi Cullam
    I am from panmure bridge school I really like your poem about the ocean rap style. Keep it up Cullam and your poem was great and it sound good I like the part when you write The Ocean The Ocean
    Eating All The Sand Around.

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  2. Hello my name is Christopher from panmure bridge school I thought this was creative because I don´t know any rap about the ocean.

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